Monday, 25 January 2016 at 02:29 with
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It all started in a cosy café after meeting
her client. She had noticed him standing outside talking on the phone peeking
inside the café. She felt sparks fly once his eyes landed on her. A smile
graced his face sending blood to her cheeks, causing her to look away.
A soft ding
radiated into the café, signalling that someone had just entered. A shadow
crossed over her table. A gentle voice slipped into her ear sending shivers
down her spine. “Is this seat taken?” Numbly, she shook her head and watched him
sit down. A waitress came over and took his order, “One cappuccino please.” He
smiled, “Oh and a slice of black forest cake for the sweet lady in front of me
too please.” Her ears turned red at the compliment. A silence thick enough to
be cut enveloped their table. She could feel his heavy stare but she refused to
make eye contact.
The waitress came back and broke the
awkwardness. A smile slipped across her face as she watched the cake appear
before her. “There’s the smile I saw.” Her smile grew.
“Thank-you for the cake.” She giggled softly, enjoying the company.
“It’s my pleasure.” He winked, slowly sipping from his cappuccino. From there a conversation was initiated.
“Thank-you for the cake.” She giggled softly, enjoying the company.
“It’s my pleasure.” He winked, slowly sipping from his cappuccino. From there a conversation was initiated.
The conversation led to her exchanging
numbers with him. Messages turned into phone calls; phone calls turned into outings.
Friends turned into best friends; best friends turned into lovers.
To celebrate their one-year anniversary, he
had taken her out on a picnic. Everything had gone smoothly. The weather was
beautiful; birds were chirping. He even took her to one of the most serene and
quiet places she had ever seen. Sneaking a glance at him she saw him slowly leaning
forward towards her.
Her heart beat furiously in her chest and
her palms sweated as she stared into the most beautiful brown eyes she had ever
seen. Her vision drifted down to the parted lips that slowly and deliberately
came closer. Her eyes fluttered shut as she prepared herself for the sweet,
soft sensation she had always yearned for.
BANG!
A sharp pain shocked her eyes open as she
stared into eyes that were once filled with sun-like warmth. Only this time a
blank pair of cold orbs stared back at her. Lips that were pouted returned to
its proper shape. His face betrayed nothing as she stared at him, struggling to
comprehend what happened.
Red. Blood.
Gasps of pain shot out of her lips. Tears
formed at the corners of her eyes as she dropped to her knees. The person who she
once knew stood in front of her grunted. She watched him as he turned his back
and walked away, leaving her alone. Blood spilled out of her wound as her life
slowly ebbed away. Her vision became blank. Her gasps slowed until they
stopped. She drew her last breath.
The stranger opened up their phone and
speed-dialled the first number on their contacts. “Supplier acquired.”
- Tsuki
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Friday, 20 November 2015 at 00:24 with
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She wasn’t always evil or known to be associated with death. Everyone and everything around her loved her. It was something inside her that changed, resulting in the Fallen. It was because of something that she turned.
A soft breeze blew on that fateful day. Lucy sat on the hard bench, letting the air cool the beads that ran down her neck. Out of everyone in the city, her heart was pure as snow. People yearned for her pure love like a child wanting candy but there was only one person, a special someone who caught her heart. He was her lover, her everything and she was his morning star, his pride and joy.
Lucy’s vision suddenly turned pitch black as something rough and hard landed on her skin. Despite the sudden loss of sight, a smile crept at the corners of her mouth as she touched the hand covering her eyes. “It’s nice to see you too,” she giggled. The hands that covered her eyes disappeared as she felt something soft and wet land on her cheek, causing a rosy hue.
“Sorry, I can’t stay any longer.” Before she could say anything he turned and left.
Confusion and disappointment filled her mind as she watched the retreating figure. Lucy would have left him alone and minded her own business but the knot in her heart made her follow him.
Hiding in the shadows she tiptoed around corners, following him. Eventually, she was led to a local cafe that was located near the border. Confusion filled her body as she watched him enter, resulting in sounds of glass breaking in her ears.
Lucy ran to the window only to see him be hugged by a different woman, her lips landing straight on his. When he noticed her, shock and horror appeared on his face. What she thought was glass turned out to be her heart shattering as she watched him struggle to pry the woman in his arms off of him.
Like two sides of a coin or whenever there is light there is darkness, the other side of love was hate. Pure love became pure hate. No tears would come to her brights eyes that once shone with happiness - only fiery hate could be found. Darkness crept into the corners of her broken heart, tainting it.
Anger, pain and hate filled her heart as she stared at the man who she once loved. The white wings that she was proud of changed. From the the pure white glow, the tips slowly turned dark until nothing but black feathered wings remained. “I’ll see you in Hell,” she hissed at him. Turning her back to the place she once called home, she crossed the border that kept Heaven and Hell separate. There, a man in a red suit stood, waiting. A smile that would have sent shivers down her spine crept along his lips.
“Welcome, my fallen angel, my dear Morning Star,” he said, opening his arms. “Welcome to Hell, Lucifer.”
Date Created: 7 September 2015
Date of Completion: 8 September 2015
Date Posted: 20 November 2015
Word Count: 500
- Tsuki
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Tuesday, 16 September 2014 at 23:52 with
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Locate target. Shoot. Run. Hide. Repeat.In this game of war no one is safe. One wrong move and you’re done for.
Everyone is my enemy. It’s every man for himself. I'm on my own. All my teammates are either dead or lying low – waiting for a chance for me to fall. I'm running, avoiding the bullets, slashing at throats as I go. I've located my target and now I slowly itch towards it.
The explosion of a gunshot to my left makes me commando roll to the opposite direction where I take out your black CZ 75 SP-01 and shoot. It hits the enemy in the forehead. A sickening crack resonated as the bullet passed right through. More enemies are coming, rushing from my right, left and in front. Like the prey trapped in a corner by its predator I knew I was trapped. I've got no choice but to fall back; I've chosen the wrong path.
This time I'm hiding among the shrubs against the rocky terrier. I'm sweating with exhaustion; sticky from enemies’ blood; mentally tired from the war. I'm near my target. I take out your Artic Wolf sniper; it’s silverly white coating gleaming in the blazing sun. I aim. Fire.
My target fell. It was game over. I fall down with relief, wiping the sweat from my forehead. The sun overhead blazed with intensity but something felt odd. I didn't receive the sense of satisfaction I thought I would get: only the feeling that something has gone horribly wrong.
I got up and crawled to the dead body only to have horror flood me like a tsunami. Blood oozed out from the gun wound. Gritting my teeth I make a run for it. I've shot the wrong target. I have to repeat my mission from the very start.
Go back, back to the beginning. Ignore the burning in my lungs, the dryness of my throat. I have to push through my boundaries and past my limit before I fail. I have to find out where I've gone wrong. That's where I've gone wrong. Hurry. Locate it.
That was where my target was, within my mistake. I'm running out of time: I have to hurry. I'm running straight ahead. I take notice of the guards standing around my true target and I growled underneath my breath. How could have I been so stupid? I took out a flash grenade and threw it overhead, where it landed right in the middle of the enemy’s circle. Taking my chance I ran with my 6” S35VN blade open, weaving in and out between my target’s guards. I snuck up from behind and interlocked my target’s head. Without any warning or heed I sliced through their neck, blood sprayed onto my camo clothes. The once dark green and brown overall slowly stained red.
I've won. I was jumping up and down. It was over.
“Sit back down, Bella. This is a maths exam for goodness sake, not some war.” It isn't to you, but it is for us students.
Story created on: -- August 2014
Story completed on: -- September 2014
Story posted on: 17 September 2014
Word Count: 450+ words?
So like, I had a different version of this but because the USB that contained it got stolen, I'm using the second-latest version of it. I had it changed from second person to first and a lot of other stuff changed too.... *sigh.
- Tsuki.
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Edit: I edited it and I realised, with all the grammatical errors I made, I wasn't going to win the competition I entered using this at all. Lmfao. Oh wells.
Copyrighted by Tsuki at Alluring Fictions. Please don't steal anything!
Edit: I edited it and I realised, with all the grammatical errors I made, I wasn't going to win the competition I entered using this at all. Lmfao. Oh wells.
Friday, 13 June 2014 at 02:33 with
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I’ve always dreaded walking this path. Regardless I had to follow it even if it sent shivers down my spine. The path itself wasn’t the problem; it was the house that stood at the top of the hill, beside the path, that scared me.
Rumours said that the house was apparently abandoned; haunted. No one knew why but the atmosphere around the house made all the animals stay away. Nothing moved; not even the wind. I stayed near the far end of the pathway just to get away. Around the house was lush with vigorous greenery and lively with playful critters. I shuddered at the thought of what could’ve happened to the innocent, lively animals if they accidentally ventured into the still space.
I ignored my fears until the fateful day when I heard children voices floating from the house, singing a melody which sounded like Ring a Ring o’ Roses. It sounded off-tune like a broken record on replay. Something just didn’t feel right. The birds weren’t singing; the animals weren’t moving; everything stayed still. Clueless, I stopped and stood for a moment, listening. That was when the lyrics floated through the still air.
“Walking down the pathway. Her body’s going sideways.” My blood turned cold, goose bumps formed uncontrollably as I listened. “There it goes! There it goes! Her head fell off.” Fear controlled my legs, forcing them to sprint far, far away from the land of dread. Not once in my life have I ever experienced something so horrifying. Trying to catch my breath, my pace slowed down into a slow walk.
“Look at her run,” a high-pitched voice laughed, “She’s not going to make it.” Several other voices joined the first voice, laughing. Stopping dead in my tracks I turned around quickly. No one was there. Like any paranoid and petrified sixteen-year old, I ran like the wind. My body was warm but my blood was still cold with fear.
Paranoia always followed me when I walked past. The thought of having one of those high-pitched children-like voices just jumping out at me… It made my body shake just thinking about it. I quickened my pace just so I could get out off the pathway.
After that, I felt as though strange things were happening. I couldn’t shake off the feeling as though there was someone, or something, whispering behind my back whenever I wasn’t looking. The compelling urge to enter the house was insanely unbearable, yet I didn’t know why it fascinated me. It was like there was an invisible rope wrapped around me, pulling me towards the house.
Years later, when the house was taken down for a new park, I swore I could hear tiny voices screaming, “You’ll regret this!” Paranoia filled my body. Cold sweat trickled down my back when a sudden touch landed on my shoulders. Jumping five foot into the air, I turned around to see nothing.
“God damn it, Angie! You have got to stop playing those horror games.”
“God damn it, Angie! You have got to stop playing those horror games.”
Story created on: 04 March 2014
Story completed on: 20 March 2014
Story posted on: 16 June 2014
Word Count: 500
Tsuki: I had entered this into a short story competition and I didn't even make it into the finals. I re-read through this and I realised why. It didn't create images in the reader's head.
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Sunday, 8 June 2014 at 03:11 with
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The only sound that could be heard were
the soft tweets of birds, the soft hums of the air conditioner and every once
in a while the roar of a car engine driving past. My average looking house was
located at the far end of the street, where everyone would never pay attention
to. The neighbours all thought that my family were a quiet peaceful bunch –
even if we didn’t come to the monthly barbeques very often.
Whenever we did, my family didn’t
socialise and party like everyone else. My dad would always drink to his
heart’s content and my mum and I would hang around our age group.
Like a lone fish following the school,
I would follow the rest of the kids and chase after the cockatoos. Trying to
fit in, my mum would have her hand over her mouth or over her chest gossiping
about the latest celebrities.
“Have you been looking after
yourself?” The usual question came up like a stone being dropped in water,
destroying the serene scene. Mum’s usual face would falter slightly but was
quickly disguised with a shrug. The housewives would start fussing over her,
telling her to look after skin because of the Australian weather while making
vegemite sandwiches for the children.
“Don’t worry, I’m just clumsy.” Mum would always say. She wasn’t clumsy though.
“Don’t worry, I’m just clumsy.” Mum would always say. She wasn’t clumsy though.
I knew all the bruises on mum’s
arms and legs weren’t from pure clumsiness. Falling over and accidentally
cutting yourself can’t just be the reason why there were dark purple splotches
and marks all over her body.
The man who claimed to be my father
is the real reason behind it. Nearly every day, this person would throw things
at my mum; punches, kicks, strangling. Name it; he’s done it.
Years later, my old man and I were
sitting near each other in front of the T.V. watching whatever was on. Excluding
the sounds from the T.V, nothing but silence hung in the air. My hand reached for
the remote control only for it to get slapped away. “Don’t even think about it
boy,” he growled, a threatening tone was evident but I was too preoccupied for
it to annoy me. A red mark was forming on my hand.
The T.V. flickered once, twice,
before it changed from the cricket show to the nightly news report. “Once
again, the mysterious slasher has appeared. A man was found near the alley way
at approximately 9:37 PM last night. The man, currently being treated at the
Royal Hospital, is the fifth victim this month.
The T.V. continuously flickered as the report continued. “All wounds
have been identified to be something small like a pocketknife or a small sharp
object. Police is unsure if the slasher is working with an accomplice or solo.”
I turned to the man lounging on the sofa with a bottle of VB beer in his hand.
“Hey dad, who do you think the slasher is?” I asked, careful to not let my emotions portray anything.
“How the hell would I know?! Could be some psychopathic girl for all I care.”
“But it could be a guy who probably has some sort of grudge against male adults.”
“Hey dad, who do you think the slasher is?” I asked, careful to not let my emotions portray anything.
“How the hell would I know?! Could be some psychopathic girl for all I care.”
“But it could be a guy who probably has some sort of grudge against male adults.”
A fist suddenly landed in my face
with a sickening crunch. I could feel something starting to drip. “You dare
talk back to me boy?!” He stood above me, gulping all the contents in the
bottle with his eagle-like eyes on me. A shocking pain came to my side making
me cry out in pain. Rolling to the side, pain shot up when something stabbed
me. Blinded with pain, stars appeared behind my eyes. “Just who do you think
you are you little piece of shit.” His huge hands grabbed me by the hair,
lifting me up. My hands flew everywhere in tiny small fists. A satisfying crack
was heard when my fists made contact with his chin. Gravity kicked in and
landed on my ass. “You’re going to regret that you fucker.” He raised his hand,
his palm forming into a fist.
“Robert! NO!” I knew that voice all too well. Please, no!
“Robert! NO!” I knew that voice all too well. Please, no!
Instead of feeling the impact that
would’ve sent me sprawled out across the floor, I felt a sickening thud on top
of me. More thuds were felt, time after time. I didn’t need to think to know
what was happening. “Mum, please, don’t do this.” Love and anguish filled her
eyes.
“Move it bitch.” He grabbed her messy brown locks and threw her to the side. Anger bubbled within me, my fists clenching and unclenching. Once more, she threw her body onto the bastard’s raised fist. Her nails dug onto his bicep as though she was hanging for dear life. Another fist flew and this time, it connected with her cheek knocking her unconscious.
“Move it bitch.” He grabbed her messy brown locks and threw her to the side. Anger bubbled within me, my fists clenching and unclenching. Once more, she threw her body onto the bastard’s raised fist. Her nails dug onto his bicep as though she was hanging for dear life. Another fist flew and this time, it connected with her cheek knocking her unconscious.
My anger burst. I saw red. “You did
not just do that you bastard.” All the anger, the hatred that had been
suppressed from all the previous years overflowed with such force my whole body
shook.
“Huh?” The old man turned and spat in my face. “Whatcha gonna do about it, cunt?” Something inside clicked and my pocket knife was drawn before I knew it. His eyes slowly widened in realisation. “You fucker! You’re that slasher!” he roared. He jumped at me; hands wide open in a groping motion. I side-stepped and kicked his legs, making him fall towards the wall.
“Nah, I’m not.” My lips curved into an arrogant smirk when fear clouded his eyes.
“You… You!” Fear had paralysed him, like a prey being cornered by its predator. My knife was drawn; my prey was in front of me. The tip pierced his skin, blood trickling down his throat.
“You don’t deserve an easy death after all the crap you put me and mum through.” Pressing harder, the person underneath me squirmed.
“I’m sorry, please.” Remorse filled his voice but disgust filled my gut. All this bastard cared about was his own life and not about his wife or his kid.
“Huh?” The old man turned and spat in my face. “Whatcha gonna do about it, cunt?” Something inside clicked and my pocket knife was drawn before I knew it. His eyes slowly widened in realisation. “You fucker! You’re that slasher!” he roared. He jumped at me; hands wide open in a groping motion. I side-stepped and kicked his legs, making him fall towards the wall.
“Nah, I’m not.” My lips curved into an arrogant smirk when fear clouded his eyes.
“You… You!” Fear had paralysed him, like a prey being cornered by its predator. My knife was drawn; my prey was in front of me. The tip pierced his skin, blood trickling down his throat.
“You don’t deserve an easy death after all the crap you put me and mum through.” Pressing harder, the person underneath me squirmed.
“I’m sorry, please.” Remorse filled his voice but disgust filled my gut. All this bastard cared about was his own life and not about his wife or his kid.
My hands moved on its own, a gash
appeared at his throat. Blood flowed from where the flesh peeked through. A
feeling of satisfactory curled my lips upwards.
Groaning from the other side
snapped me back into reality. “Oscar, what happened?” A gasp resonated. “Why
are you covered in blood?!”
I moved to the side, revealing the man with the cut across his neck and eyes rolled back.
“Y-You monster!” Confusion filled my brain. “How could you?!” She backed towards the wall as though there was a monster in the living room.
“Mum, don’t be scared. It’s me, Oscar, your son.”
“You’re no son of mine!” She screamed. “Give them back!” Gurgles filled the air as she slumped down.
“I did everything for you. I did it for you, mum.” A whisper filled with longing filled the air as I stared into her blank eyes.
I moved to the side, revealing the man with the cut across his neck and eyes rolled back.
“Y-You monster!” Confusion filled my brain. “How could you?!” She backed towards the wall as though there was a monster in the living room.
“Mum, don’t be scared. It’s me, Oscar, your son.”
“You’re no son of mine!” She screamed. “Give them back!” Gurgles filled the air as she slumped down.
“I did everything for you. I did it for you, mum.” A whisper filled with longing filled the air as I stared into her blank eyes.
Created on: 17 March 2014
Completed on: 20 March 2014
Word Count: 1,148
Creator: Changed because it was way to dramatic... :|
The only sound that could be heard were
the soft tweets of birds, the soft hums of the air conditioner and every once
in a while the roar of a car engine driving past. My average looking house was located at the far end of the street,
where everyone would never pay attention to. The neighbours all thought that my
family were a quiet
peaceful bunch – even if we didn’t come to the monthly
barbeques very often.
Whenever we did, my family didn’t
socialise and party like everyone else. My dad would always drink to his
heart’s content and my mum and I would hang around our age group.
Like a lone fish following the school, I would follow the rest of the kids and
chase after the cockatoos. Trying to fit in, my mum would have her hand over
her mouth or over her chest gossiping about the latest celebrities.
“Have you been looking after
yourself?” The usual question came up like a stone being dropped in water, destroying the serene scene. Mum’s usual
face would falter slightly but was quickly disguised with a shrug. The
housewives would start fussing over her, telling her to look after skin because
of the Australian weather while making vegemite sandwiches for the children.
“Don’t worry, I’m just clumsy.” Mum would always say; she wasn’t clumsy though.
“Don’t worry, I’m just clumsy.” Mum would always say; she wasn’t clumsy though.
I knew all the bruises on mum’s
arms and legs weren’t from pure clumsiness. Falling over and accidentally
cutting yourself can’t just be the reason why there were dark purple splotches
and marks all over her body.
The man who claimed to be my father is
the real reason behind it. Nearly every day, this person would throw things at
my mum; punches, kicks, strangling. Name it; he’s done it.
Years later, my old man and I were
sitting near each other in front of the T.V. watching whatever was on. Excluding
the sounds from the T.V, nothing but silence hung in the air. My hand reached for
the remote control only for it to get slapped away. “Don’t even think about it, boy,” he growled, a threatening tone was evident but I was too
preoccupied for it to annoy me. A red mark was forming on my hand.
The T.V. flickered once, twice,
before it changed from the cricket show to the nightly news report. “Once
again, the mysterious slasher has appeared. A man was found near the alley way at approximately 9:37 PM last night. The
man, currently being treated at the Royal Hospital, is the fifth victim this
month. The T.V. continuously flickered
as the report continued. “All wounds have been identified
to be something small like a pocketknife or a small sharp object. Police are unsure if the slasher is working with an
accomplice or solo.” I turned to the man lounging on the sofa with a bottle of
VB beer in his hand.
“Hey dad, who do you think the slasher is?” I asked, careful to not let my emotions portray anything.
“How the hell would I know?! Could be some psychopathic girl for all I care.”
“But it could be a guy who probably has some sort of grudge against male adults.”
“Are you trying to say that I’m stupid?!” He roared. Pain shot through my ear at the intensity and volume of his voice. No complaint or words came out of my mouth, my eyes focusing on the fur ball that sat in the corner of the room.
“Hey dad, who do you think the slasher is?” I asked, careful to not let my emotions portray anything.
“How the hell would I know?! Could be some psychopathic girl for all I care.”
“But it could be a guy who probably has some sort of grudge against male adults.”
“Are you trying to say that I’m stupid?!” He roared. Pain shot through my ear at the intensity and volume of his voice. No complaint or words came out of my mouth, my eyes focusing on the fur ball that sat in the corner of the room.
My mum loved this cat. She said it
would always keep her company when I was at school and my dad was doing who
knows what. She also said that it was her best friend, someone she could turn to. She had originally named
it ‘Orangutan’ after the colour of its fur and because it had unusually long
limbs but changed it to Tigger after the bouncing tiger from my childhood T.V
show: Winnie
the Pooh.
“In other news, the strange deaths
of animals on the streets have brought many animal lovers to tears. This mysterious
slaughterer has been targeting pets and stray animals alike so make sure to
keep your pets indoors at night.” I had grabbed the cat by its cuff and a loud
hiss resonated in the room followed by a loud ‘OUCH!’ I chased after the cat,
running after it to the small backyard. I caught its orange fluffy tail,
watching out for the claws as it tried to scratch me.
A loud crash from inside and a female scream made me drop what I was
doing. “ROBERT! STOP!” My anger bubbled within me, my fists clenching and
unclenching as I heard my mum continuously scream. A loud thud could be heard from inside
the house followed by the sound of slapping and heavy thumps. My fingers inched
towards the item in my pocket. “Please, stop. No more.” Without even thinking I
had drawn my pocket knife and grasped it firmly in my right hand. My left hand
grasped the door pane tightly to the point my knuckles turned white.
I remained at the door until
nothing but silence was heard. All of a sudden, soft crying made me step inside
the moment my dad turned the corner. He saw the pocket knife and his lips
curled into a smirk. “Are you going to hurt me boy?” he snarled. My anger
popped and I ran at him, my arm raised.
Before I could do any harm to him,
he stopped me with one hand, grabbed the knife and landed a punch, sending me
breathless. I coughed and gasped for the precious air
that was knocked out of me. “I’ll be taking this, you ungrateful brat.” He
walked upstairs to his room before shutting the door with a loud ‘bang’.
I painfully got up, wincing as I
walked to my mum’s side who was crying to the side hugging the cat that had
sprinted into the house. A resentful feeling built up in my chest as I watched
the scene in front of me. Disgusted, I left the lounge room and went out back
where I stayed for the rest of the day.
Night fell with the moon and stars
glittering in the midnight sky. I creaked open the door and carefully slipped
in, making sure that I avoided the light that slipped through the curtains. My
eyes glanced left and right, searching for the object that was taken away a
couple of hours earlier. It felt like hours when only a few minutes had passed
when my eyes finally landed on the knife that was hidden well in the dark. I picked it
up and opened it, staring at the blade, numerous thoughts flooded my head.
I tip-toed over to the side of the
sleeping figure and raised the blade. Hesitation washed over me like a tsunami, making me pocket my blade and slipping
back out to search for something else.
I found the sleeping silhouette in
the backyard, underneath the light of the full moon. I grabbed the cat and drew
my knife, stabbing it in the eye. A loud cry of pain came from the fur ball. To keep it
from waking up the whole neighbourhood, I slashed the neck. Bright red blood spurted at me as the
body in my hand went limp. “She’s mine, not yours. I’m meant to look after her, not you.” I
growled with menace.
Completed on: 27 March 2014
Word Count: 1,234
Creator: Still didn't work.
The only sound that could be heard were
the soft tweets of birds, the soft hum of the air conditioner and every once in
a while the roar of a car engine driving past. The house with its peeling paint
was located at the far end of the street, where no one would pay attention. The
neighbours all thought that my family were a quiet, peaceful bunch – even if we
didn’t come to the monthly barbeques often.
Whenever we did, my family didn’t
socialise and relax like everyone else. My dad would always drink to his
heart’s content and my kookaburra-loving mum and I would hang around our respective
age groups.
Like a lone
fish following the school, I would follow the rest of the kids and chase after
flocks of cockatoos. Trying to fit in, my mum would have her hand over her
mouth or over her chest gossiping about the latest celebrities.
“Have you been looking after
yourself?” The usual question came up like a stone being dropped in water,
destroying the serene scene. Mum’s usually calm face would falter slightly but
was quickly disguised with a shrug. The housewives would start fussing over
her, while making vegemite sandwiches, telling her to look after her skin because
of the Australian weather with its blazing sun and scorching heat.
“Don’t worry, I’m just clumsy.” Mum would always say; she wasn’t clumsy though.
Not even close.
I knew all the bruises on mum’s
arms and legs weren’t from pure clumsiness. Falling over and accidentally
cutting yourself can’t just be the reason why there were dark purple splotches
and marks all over your body.
The man who claimed to be my father
is the real reason behind it. Nearly every day, this person would torture her;
punches, kicks, strangling. You name it; he’s done it.
Days passed; months passed; years
passed but nothing changed. The abuse continued; scars faded only for new ones
to replace them, more visible than before. The anger within only grew stronger
and stronger.
My old man and I were near each
other watching whatever was on T.V. Excluding the T.V, nothing but silence hung
in the air. I reached for the remote control only for my hand to get slapped.
“Don’t even think about it, boy,” he growled. The threatening tone was clear as
daylight but I was too preoccupied for it to annoy me. A red handprint formed on
my hand.
The T.V. flickered once, twice,
before it changed from the cricket show to the 7News report. “Once again, the midnight
slasher has appeared. A man was found near the alleyway at approximately 12 AM early
this morning. The man, currently being treated at the Royal Hospital, is the
fifth victim this month.” The T.V. flickered once more as the report continued.
“All wounds have been identified to be something small like a pocketknife or a
small sharp object. Police are unsure if the slasher is working with an accomplice
or if they’re on their own. They are also bewildered by the fact that the all
leads end up as a dead end.” I turned to the man lounging on the sofa with a
bottle of VB beer in his hand.
“Hey dad, who do you think it is?” I asked, careful to not let my emotions slip.
“How the hell would I know?! Could be some psychopathic girl for all I care.”
“I heard it’s a guy who probably has some sort of grudge against male adults.”
“Are you trying to say that I’m stupid?!” He roared. Pain shot through my ear
at the intensity and volume but no complaint or words came out of my mouth. My
eyes were focused on the fur ball that sat in the corner.
My mum loved this cat. She said it
always kept her company when I was at school and my dad was doing who knows
what. She also said that it was her best friend, someone she could turn to. She
had originally named it ‘Orangutan’ after its orange fur and because it’s unusually
long limbs but changed it to ‘Tigger’ after the bouncing tiger from my
childhood T.V show: Winnie the Pooh.
“In other news, the strange mutilations
of street animals have brought many animal lovers to tears. This mysterious
slaughterer has been targeting pets and stray animals alike so make sure to
keep your pets indoors at night.” I had grabbed the cat by its cuff. A loud
hiss resonated followed by a loud ‘OUCH!’ I chased after the orange bundle,
running after it into the small backyard. I caught its orange fluffy tail,
watching out for the claws as it tried to blind me.
A loud crash from inside and a
female scream made me drop what I was doing. “ROBERT! STOP!” Anger bubbled
within me, my fists clenching and unclenching as I heard my mum continuously
scream. A loud thud could be heard from inside the house followed by the sound
of slapping and heavier thumps. My fingers inched towards the item in my
pocket. “Please, stop. No more.” Without even thinking I had drawn my pocketknife
and grasped it firmly in my right hand. My left hand grasped the door pane
tightly – turning my knuckles white.
I remained at the door until
nothing but silence was heard. Soft crying made me step inside just as my dad
turned the corner. He saw the pocketknife and his lips curled into a smirk.
“Are you going to hurt me boy?” he snarled. My anger popped and I ran at him,
my arm raised.
Before I could do anything, he
stopped me with one hand, grabbed the knife and landed a punch, leaving me breathless.
I coughed and gasped for precious air. “I’ll be taking this, you ungrateful
brat.” He walked upstairs to his room before slamming the door with a loud ‘bang’.
I got up, ignoring the pain that
shot up from my leg; I walked to my mum’s side who was crying, hugging the cat
that had sprinted into the house. A resentful feeling built up in my chest as I
watched the scene in front of me. Disgusted, I left the lounge room and went
out back where I stayed for the rest of the day.
Night fell with the moon and stars
glittering in the midnight sky. I creaked open the door and carefully slipped
in, making sure that I avoided the moonlight that slipped through the curtains.
My eyes glanced left and right, searching for the object that was taken away a
couple of hours earlier. It felt like hours when only a few minutes had passed
when my eyes finally landed on the knife that was hidden well in the dark.
I tiptoed to its location, opened
it and stared at the blade. The memories of abuse, the images of my battered
mum crying, all the scars that littered my body fuelled the anger within. Instead
of closing it and slipping it into my pocket, I glided over to the sleeping
figure. Memories of feats before this floated into my mind as I brought my
raised arm onto the body, once again all the anger inside dissipated.
Story created on: 20 March 2014
Story completed on: 04 April 2014
Story posted on: 08 June 2014
Story completed on: 04 April 2014
Story posted on: 08 June 2014
Word Count: 1,200
Creator: I'm not satisfied with it at all but I just hope I get a good mark for my English haha.
Copyrighted by Creator of Alluring Fictions. Don't steal anything. :)
Thursday, 21 November 2013 at 03:01 with
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He drew his last breath, his last tears falling off his
face. Éclair clenched the dirty golden locket she was given and gave him one
last prayer. She sat beside him, keeping his soul company until he was finally
moved to who knows where.
The location of where the men were moved was kept hidden
from the nurses. Éclair didn’t know why; was it to keep them from seeing such a
horrible sight or was it just to keep the nurses in the dark? Either way, she
just hated the fact that the nurses were made to be inferior – that they
couldn’t take it.
Dusting herself off and slipping the pocket into her
bloodied pocket, Éclair moved from her station to get some air. Moving away
from the once-white tent she walked to the tent with the red ‘P’ hanging from
the top.
“Please send this to Private Smith’s fiancé,” Éclair stated,
holding the locket by its chains.
“First name?” The old nurse behind the counter frantically searched for an envelope to put the locket in. “We do have a lot of ‘Private Smith’ after all.” She said it in a tone that it was hard not to smile but Éclair didn’t smile. The lady stared at her and sighed. “It’s war my dear. He died for resistance, he died for the country. The only thing that we nurses can do is to smile and make this war bearable for them.” Hearing those words made Éclair smile just a bit but the old nurse knew it was more than enough. “So his first name?” Éclair blinked – clueless – until she realised what she meant.
“First name?” The old nurse behind the counter frantically searched for an envelope to put the locket in. “We do have a lot of ‘Private Smith’ after all.” She said it in a tone that it was hard not to smile but Éclair didn’t smile. The lady stared at her and sighed. “It’s war my dear. He died for resistance, he died for the country. The only thing that we nurses can do is to smile and make this war bearable for them.” Hearing those words made Éclair smile just a bit but the old nurse knew it was more than enough. “So his first name?” Éclair blinked – clueless – until she realised what she meant.
“Oh right, John Smith,” she said, passing the locket to the old nurse. “And
please send a message as well. ‘To Annabelle, I love you. From John’.” The lady
nodded once and Éclair left the room.
Éclair went back to her station and treated the wounded
soldiers that came in and out every few hours or so. As the days went by, she
tried to smile for them but her smile began turning weary. Her frown lines
gradually becoming more visible. The patients that would come in screaming
frightened her; the ones that told her that they were scared to die made her
feel pity; she just hated the war and the current government altogether. She
just wanted everything to end, so that there wouldn't be anymore suffering.
Thoughts came into her head where she would personally deal with the situation
herself, that she was strong enough to kill her inner feelings and become a
killing machine but she removed the thoughts at once. She was a nurse for
goodness sake! But then when she had taken all she could, Éclair snapped.
She had enough. There was no way she could put up with it
anymore. As a nurse, Éclair took the liberty of sneaking into the supply stock
and stole a clean male uniform. She took a bandage and wrapped it around her
breasts, constricting it to the point there wasn’t any lumps and it was hard to
breathe. Éclair checked herself twice before putting on the male uniform.
“Looks too clean,” she mumbled underneath her breath. She knew she was going to
regret what she was going to do next in the future, but she did it anyways.
Taking out a Stanley knife from one of the boxes she made several cuts on her
arm, leg and a small cut on her face through the uniform, before wrapping
another bandage around the wounds. With a quick check in the mirror she noticed
that her hair was too feminine to be recognised as a guy. Staring at the knife in
her hand, she closed her eyes and cut off the luscious locks that had taken her
years to grow. For the last time, she checked herself in the cracked mirror and
nodded. “Good enough.” With that, she left the tent as a new soldier fighting
as a member of the resistance – to try to free her country.
Éclair sat with other male soldiers in a truck who had
sullen faces. Despite the faces and the depressing atmosphere, she was prepared
to risk her life to fight. “Careful men, we’re entering enemy base.” The sergeant
whispered, his hand tightly clasped around his rifle. Everyone else began
getting ready for the war but Éclair was already ready, her hands in position
to use the weapon. Despite being a female, her father had secretly taught her
how to use guns and some martial art at a young age.
BOOM. A loud explosion landed right next to the truck which
sent it flying. Éclair gasped as everyone began screaming. Despite the flying
truck, she managed to open the door and tumble out, not caring if anyone else
survived or not. It was the survival of the fittest after all.
She landed with an ungraceful bellow before staring at the
familiar boots in front of her. The boots belonged to people who followed the
notorious leader that ruled over the country, creating chaos everywhere. Hatred
bubbled inside her and before she knew it, she had taken out her knife and with
a quick slice, the opposing soldier shook on the ground with blood spurting
from his neck. “THE RESISTANCE IS HERE, GET INTO YOUR BATTLE FORMATION!” The leader
of the opposing army roared. He began shouting orders, trying to kill anyone
who resisted the Lord but it was too late. With her female body, Éclair was
nimble and thus was quick to slip into the other army’s borders.
Éclair began killing the soldiers, despite the fact that her
life was on the line. With her knowledge of guns and her use of martial arts,
before the opposing army knew it, a quarter of their front line had died. “STOP
HIM!” The leader roared.
“Too late.” Éclair whispered into his ear. She had managed to get to the leader and with one pull of the trigger, blood splashed everywhere and the ex-leader’s body slumped onto the floor. She stood over the body, not noticing another soldier behind her. Before she knew it, a stinging sensation appeared at her throat and she felt a trickling trail.
“Hands up before your head goes,” A soldier with a heavy accent growled behind her. She spat on the ground and did what she was told.
“Too late.” Éclair whispered into his ear. She had managed to get to the leader and with one pull of the trigger, blood splashed everywhere and the ex-leader’s body slumped onto the floor. She stood over the body, not noticing another soldier behind her. Before she knew it, a stinging sensation appeared at her throat and she felt a trickling trail.
“Hands up before your head goes,” A soldier with a heavy accent growled behind her. She spat on the ground and did what she was told.
Éclair’s stomach grumbled, yearning for something to fill
it. She didn’t know how long it had been but she knew for sure that every
second hour, other soldiers would come in and torture her. They would whip her
on the arms and legs; torture her with a knife and other torturous things that
she didn’t dare name.
“TELL US EVERYTHING!” One of the soldiers glared. The other
soldier grinned at her as he continued torturing her. Éclair sucked up as much
moisture as she could in her mouth and spat it at the person hovering above
her.
“Over my dead body,” she growled, trying to make her voice low as possible. The soldier wiped her spit away from his face and grinned.
“My pleasure.” He angled the blade above her heart and brought it down.
“Wait,” the other soldier stopped his mate before it met its target, just missing by a few inches. “The Lord wants to meet him, the single soldier who managed to kill so many people by himself.” His eyes stared at her coldly before motioning his mate to let her go and bring him to the leader.
“Over my dead body,” she growled, trying to make her voice low as possible. The soldier wiped her spit away from his face and grinned.
“My pleasure.” He angled the blade above her heart and brought it down.
“Wait,” the other soldier stopped his mate before it met its target, just missing by a few inches. “The Lord wants to meet him, the single soldier who managed to kill so many people by himself.” His eyes stared at her coldly before motioning his mate to let her go and bring him to the leader.
“Oh? So you’re the person who killed so many people?” The Lord
stared at her with interest. Éclair looked around to see that there was only
one person with a rifle standing guard. “You’re much younger than I expected.”
Éclair showed no expression in front of him, trying not to rush up and kill the
man. The lord got off his seat and made his way towards her, observing her as
though she was a rare animal in the zoo. “You should work for me, I’d pay for
you a lot for your handy work.” He stood in front of her, staring her down.
Éclair scoffed at his offer.
“I’d rather die than work for you,” she snarled. The leader sighed and wagged his finger in front of her in disappointment. Éclair took that opportunity to jump up and clamp her teeth onto his finger biting down hard. The leader swore in anger before slapping her across the face. She let go in surprise.
“If that’s what you want then so be it.” He signalled for his man to come close and aim his rifle at her.
“I’d rather die than work for you,” she snarled. The leader sighed and wagged his finger in front of her in disappointment. Éclair took that opportunity to jump up and clamp her teeth onto his finger biting down hard. The leader swore in anger before slapping her across the face. She let go in surprise.
“If that’s what you want then so be it.” He signalled for his man to come close and aim his rifle at her.
Before Éclair got shot, she quickly ran behind the person
handling the gun and knocked him unconscious. During the hours that she wasn’t
tortured, she had managed to unlock the handcuffs to the point they would fall off
with a single shake.
She picked up the dropped gun and aimed it at the quivering
leader. “L-Let’s talk about this,” the leader laughed unsurely. He took several
steps back. Back towards the door that led as an escape.
“Don’t even try running away. I’ll shoot before you can,” but her threat fell upon deaf ears as he tried to make a run for it. Éclair shook her head and shot, the bullet piercing right through a vital point.
“Don’t even try running away. I’ll shoot before you can,” but her threat fell upon deaf ears as he tried to make a run for it. Éclair shook her head and shot, the bullet piercing right through a vital point.
The bang from the gun caused soldiers to rush into the room,
gaping at the sight before them. Some saw Éclair and raised their rifle at her
but they didn’t dare shoot. Who dared shoot someone that managed to defeat the person they followed? “It’s over.” Éclair walked towards them, still
carrying the weapon. All of the soldiers made a clear path for her as she
walked past. She threw the weapon aside and exited outside. Everyone looked up
at her and rumours quickly arose. “It’s over. The leader’s dead.” Her voice drifted over the men below, who had quieted down the moment she spoke. She looked at the sky and smiled softly. The war was finally over. The
rebellion had won.
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Creator:
Okaaayyy... Weird but yeah. Lmfao. This was my English exam... well... part of it that is. Only from the red "S' and afterwards is. Haha. (I kind of tweaked it just a bit too to make it seem better.) Original length for English exam is 600... The bit that I put in is almost literally over. 1,196 words. (Y) Yee. Lmfao. Oh wells.
Story created on: 15 November 2013
Story completed on: 20 November 2013
Story posted on: 21 November 2013
Copyrighted by Creator; any similarities are by coincidence.
Take anything from this story and the Creator will personally find you and slaughter you. ^^
Word Count: 1,677
Thursday, 31 October 2013 at 03:36 with
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Music was her favourite class. Singing was her favourite hobby. It was basically the one thing that kept her motivation up when it came to school. It was no wonder why ever year she was in music class. For her, it was a bit disappointing that she didn't top the class but she still enjoyed it nonetheless.It was the final term for her music class and her final assessment was singing. Singing was her strong point since she just absolutely loved to sing. Her parents knew it was her dream career to become a vocalist but they didn’t provide her with any professional training – like she wanted it anyways. Psh.
Even without professional training, she managed to put
herself into the highest category for singing – soprano. She was one of the only
two in her class that could do it (she didn’t know if there was anyone else
from the other class could do it or not). There was another girl who was
extremely close to being a soprano but ended up being a mezzo soprano. But even
so, since there weren’t enough girls the teacher put two more girls who she
assumed could hit the high notes into the soprano group just for practice.
Most of the times, there were some misunderstanding between
her and the other soprano singer. There was something about that vocalist that
just made her want to just…. Wrap her hands around her throat and squeeze it.
She’s told one of her friends about her want before and their only response was
“Whoa, calm down Whitney. You’re scary.”
To her, she felt it was because of the way the other singer
kept on boasting about the way she sings. About how she was able to hit the
high notes with ease while everyone else was struggling. “No, I don’t find that
funny at all. I do it so yeah,” she replied with a cocky tone while rolling her
eyes in the process. Whitney balled her hands into a tight fist, trying to
resist the strong urge to punch the girl. No,
calm down Whitney. Don’t let this chick get to you, she told herself.
The lessons went by and the cockiness of the other soprano
just grew. But Whitney hadn’t told the other soprano about how she felt about
her. Backstabbing wasn’t really her thing so she kept it to herself and just
ignored the girl. By the time the practice was over and they were allowed to
split up into their own group, her resilience to not punch her had grown thin.
Her mind filled with poison, bitterness in her words. But still, she kept up
the façade of being nice just for the sake of it.
The time for the final assessment had come and Whitney had
lost it. She asked if she could talk to the other soprano privately. She didn’t
want any distractions when she was finally getting everything, all her
bitterness and poison, out of her system.
When they were alone, Whitney turned around and had her
hands tightly clasped behind her back just in case she would end up lashing out
at the other girl. “Look, Krystal, I know you’re nice and all that but in all
honesty… You need to stop with all your cockiness and bitchiness when it comes
to singing,” she said, trying not to let her emotion show. She didn’t want to
end it in a bad way and get caught into trouble. “So what you have professional
training and all that crap, some of us are trying hard too you know. Like
seriously, for fucks sakes, just try not to be a total bitch anymore would you?
By the way, I didn’t back stab your or any of that shit. So don’t think badly
of me or anything alright?” With that, Whitney left Krystal alone before she
could do anything harmful… Like punch the girl in the face for example?
But Whitney was glad. She was happy that she finally got
everything out of her system before it became unbearable.
The next few weeks, Whitney was surprised to see that
Krystal hadn’t been showing her cocky side for a while but thought nothing of
it. Maybe her little honesty talk made Krystal what she was doing but Whitney
didn’t count on it.
Little did Whitney know, it actually was because of her that
Krystal had slowly changed. Krystal never got the chance to express her
feelings – to say thank you. Those feelings of thankfulness stayed hidden for
the next few lessons until she actually got the chance to tell Whitney it. To
say thank you.
She never did. Graduation passed, they both moved on and
lost contact of each other. That thankfulness remained hidden in the depths of
Krystal’s heart forever.
~~~~~
Creator:
A random spark of inspiration. I don't even know how it turned out. haha. Pretty... Crap in my opinion but oh wells. Haha. Sigh. Oh wells...
Story created on: 25 October 2013
Story completed on: 31 October 2013
Story posted on: 31 October 2013
Copyrighted by Creator; any similarities are by coincidence.
Take anything from this story and the Creator will personally find you and slaughter you. ^^
Word count: 799.


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